toggle Posted by KuriJaVaba 2012-01-03 03:41:02 UpDown

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That moment, 2:37, is epic. Definitely my favorite part about this. The stop/slow-motion thing really worked for capturing the surprise and shock (and awesome) of that moment.

That was really all that impressed me though.

The characters weren't developed at all. I felt no sympathy for the male lead when we were told his "lady friend" had been killed because until that moment I hadn't even known he had a lady friend--or a personality. I would have liked to know him more. All I know is that he's good with numbers, pulled a heist right out of school, and that he's screwing with this heist group.

I also had trouble getting involved in the film because I had trouble believing it. It just distracted me. For example, the finger being shot and he barely cares, the woman with the guy being SO distracted by him knocking over that little thing.

My final criticism is mostly just a pet peeve. There were a frustrating number of unabashed cliches. The throwing of the cigarette to show the tension, the use of the phrase "Jacky-boy", and the ending of the candle being blown out because of the death.

Are you coming out with an episode 2? I would be interested to see where the story goes and how the characters could develop.

That moment, 2:37, is epic. Definitely my favorite part about this. The stop/slow-motion thing really worked for capturing the surprise and shock (and awesome) of that moment. That was really all that impressed me though. The characters weren't developed at all. I felt no sympathy for the male lead when we were told his "lady friend" had been killed because until that moment I hadn't even known he had a lady friend--or a personality. I would have liked to know him more. All I know is that he's good with numbers, pulled a heist right out of school, and that he's screwing with this heist group. I also had trouble getting involved in the film because I had trouble believing it. It just distracted me. For example, the finger being shot and he barely cares, the woman with the guy being SO distracted by him knocking over that little thing. My final criticism is mostly just a pet peeve. There were a frustrating number of unabashed cliches. The throwing of the cigarette to show the tension, the use of the phrase "Jacky-boy", and the ending of the candle being blown out because of the death. Are you coming out with an episode 2? I would be interested to see where the story goes and how the characters could develop.

toggle Posted by kurt.paulsen 2011-12-18 20:51:58 UpDown

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What?! The guy gets shot- in the finger, and somehow the flesh is stripped of leaving exposed bone- and he seems not to notice until after he gets a cup of water. WTF? That's aside from the most awful dialog ever. I'll pass on any further eps, thanks.

What?! The guy gets shot- in the finger, and somehow the flesh is stripped of leaving exposed bone- and he seems not to notice until after he gets a cup of water. WTF? That's aside from the most awful dialog ever. I'll pass on any further eps, thanks.

toggle Posted by mvan231 2011-06-29 06:28:31 UpDown

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next episode release?

next episode release?

toggle Posted by PlasticAgeProductions 2011-05-16 23:55:57 UpDown

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I love it. I'm biased because I did the practical FX, but I love it.

I love it. I'm biased because I did the practical FX, but I love it.

toggle Posted by giner 2011-04-23 21:50:31 UpDown

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I don't like movies like that, I like positives ones but technically this is a great job! Thanks!

I don't like movies like that, I like positives ones but technically this is a great job! Thanks!

toggle Posted by XyphynX9 2011-03-23 22:33:00 UpDown

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Very nice dude. May I suggest making the episodes longer?

Very nice dude. May I suggest making the episodes longer?

toggle Posted by RJWeditor 2011-04-01 01:00:42 Publisher UpDown

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Thanks! Yeah, the next episode shoots at the end of May and should be longer than the pilot. Got some really cool stuff in store.

Thanks! Yeah, the next episode shoots at the end of May and should be longer than the pilot. Got some really cool stuff in store.

toggle Posted by pranav_waghmare 2011-02-11 15:36:59 UpDown

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just three friends making a pilot for 6 hours on the weekend. !!! That is certainly inspiring.I would like to see next episode.

just three friends making a pilot for 6 hours on the weekend. !!! That is certainly inspiring.I would like to see next episode.

toggle Posted by RJWeditor 2011-02-19 04:23:05 Publisher UpDown

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Thanks! It was a blast to create and whether we receive funding or not the series will be shot this summer.

Thanks! It was a blast to create and whether we receive funding or not the series will be shot this summer.

toggle Posted by tdobson 2011-01-30 04:33:21 UpDown

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Great to hear Diablo String Orchestra being used! :D

Great to hear Diablo String Orchestra being used! :D

toggle Posted by pranav_waghmare 2011-01-29 18:41:32 UpDown

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Nice attempt.

Nice attempt.

toggle Posted by hp06 2011-01-25 14:24:19 UpDown

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There is a mistake on 2.45..Look at cut finger.

Also I think, that there is a lot of music. Cause them I could realy hear the dialog.

Maybe it would be better include some tension/suspense sounds?

But the shots are nice.

There is a mistake on 2.45..Look at cut finger. Also I think, that there is a lot of music. Cause them I could realy hear the dialog. Maybe it would be better include some tension/suspense sounds? But the shots are nice.

toggle Posted by Chrisderickson 2011-01-26 05:32:13 UpDown

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I wish tv series were this cool i love the dynamics of the blows and shots fired from the guns. i dont know anything about that cut finger it looked narly and omg was that a bone sticking out i mean really this is awesome i hope more comes soon. And the music was awesome i couldnt have imagined this any different! who's Ty Yaeger anyways hes good but i only see he has 3 imdb.com credits for films ive never seen is he new in the film industry?

I wish tv series were this cool i love the dynamics of the blows and shots fired from the guns. i dont know anything about that cut finger it looked narly and omg was that a bone sticking out i mean really this is awesome i hope more comes soon. And the music was awesome i couldnt have imagined this any different! who's Ty Yaeger anyways hes good but i only see he has 3 imdb.com credits for films ive never seen is he new in the film industry?

toggle Posted by RJWeditor 2011-01-26 07:13:31 Publisher UpDown

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We are just a couple friends living in Illinois. Thanks, for the compliments! Ty is an amazing actor, he's just getting started but he's a very dynamic actor that we have had in a couple different projects.

If you would like to see more episodes please, toss us a couple bucks with the "Donate" button on the side. The plan for episode #2 is pretty awesome. Every dollar helps.

We are just a couple friends living in Illinois. Thanks, for the compliments! Ty is an amazing actor, he's just getting started but he's a very dynamic actor that we have had in a couple different projects. If you would like to see more episodes please, toss us a couple bucks with the "Donate" button on the side. The plan for episode #2 is pretty awesome. Every dollar helps.

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Thanks for the response. Music choices are what I wanted, I did not go with tension/suspense sounds on purpose cause that's not what "Bummer" is. I've been aware of the finger mistake since day one, but the fact of the matter is it was just three friends making a pilot for 6 hours on the weekend.

Thanks for the response. Music choices are what I wanted, I did not go with tension/suspense sounds on purpose cause that's not what "Bummer" is. I've been aware of the finger mistake since day one, but the fact of the matter is it was just three friends making a pilot for 6 hours on the weekend.

toggle Posted by heepie 2011-01-21 01:35:02 UpDown

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Really nice. Can't wait for the rest of the series

Really nice. Can't wait for the rest of the series

toggle Posted by tim_h 2011-01-20 20:08:07 UpDown

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Awesome pilot. I hope the rest of the series becomes a reality.

Awesome pilot. I hope the rest of the series becomes a reality.

toggle Posted by RJWeditor 2011-01-20 16:26:57 Publisher UpDown

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This is the first project I've ever directed. Please let me know what you think. I set out to create a fun web series.

This is the first project I've ever directed. Please let me know what you think. I set out to create a fun web series.